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no one special
by John IlotanI am no one special
just a man
who feels too much
I've lost my sense
of sight and sound
I've lost my sense
of touch
But I can feel your heart beat
I can hear it call to me
it beats upon my broken heart
like rain against the sea
and oh, I long to hold you
just to feel your love again
but I'm adrift
too far from shore
to swim back home again
06/04/2009 Posted on 06/05/2009
Copyright © 2024 John Ilotan
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Genevieve Sturrock on 06/05/09 at 12:22 PM beautiful and poignant |
| Posted by Kris Mara on 06/05/09 at 12:42 PM yes and well rounded, with great flow and metaphor...this is lovely. |
| Posted by Brian Francis on 06/07/09 at 03:23 AM Well crafted - very nice piece here. The rhyme adds to the overall poignancy of the work. --bf |
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