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by Alison McKenzie

When this moment
Is stripped down
Naked of pretense,
Bereft of sun and star,
Moonless –

When the world is
Without architectural majesty,
And technology has slipped
Back into its sleeve
In silence –

When the dolphins and whales
Have loaded up
The caravans
To roam the galaxies
Like the gypsies
They were always born to be –

When the blood in my skin
Has boiled away to dust
And I’ve taken to the wind –

Will any of this matter?
I mean, really…
The men, and the grief,
The bits of my heart
Consumed by the big, black hole
Of ineffability;
The life squandered
On ridiculous endeavors,
The children grown and gone?
I mean, really...

06/03/2009

Posted on 06/04/2009
Copyright © 2025 Alison McKenzie

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Clara Mae Gregory on 06/04/09 at 10:01 AM

MMmmm. I have had similar thoughts. I love the way you describe it.

Posted by Charlie Morgan on 06/04/09 at 12:27 PM

...mmmmdelightful. really. really? i mean, REALLY!

Posted by Kris Mara on 06/04/09 at 01:50 PM

...thoughts to contemplate, indeed...

Posted by Mary Frances Spencer on 06/04/09 at 03:34 PM

Well...all we are is vibration...so in the big picture all of our "stuff" really doesn't matter, although it seems so important now. Let's just enjoy the ride and raise up our thoughts/actions to the highest intention!

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