The hunger by Keith D Allison gazing upon the glass as the water droplets fall those clamoring unforgiving rhythm of time those scars upon the mind The breeze fueled the coldness of the beauty of your eyes you were the master of breaking world’s to bring the unbearable pain yet the purpose was fulfilled keeping from the cold from the emptiness of night your need’s filled sparkling eyes forgot now something left behind to feed empty the field Within the hunger forever lost 06/03/2009 Posted on 06/03/2009 Copyright © 2024 Keith D Allison Member Comments on this Poem Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 06/03/09 at 10:57 PM Forever and forever and forever, eh? Great closer. Nice work across the board though. Posted by Gregory O'Neill on 07/22/09 at 07:25 PM This cries out for a Dylan Thomas quote: "Though they go mad, they shall be sane, Though they sink through the sea, they shall rise again, Though lovers be lost, Love shall not. And Death Shall Have No Dominion." Bravo, Keith. Thanks. Return to the Previous Page   pathetic.org Version 7.3.2 May 2004 Terms and Conditions of Use 0 member(s) and 2 visitor(s) online All works Copyright © 2024 their respective authors. Page Generated In 0 Second(s)