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Undone

by Joe Cramer

When you talk to me
I hear this sweet melody.
My heart is undone, set free.
This is the man that I want to be.
Your voice brings a freedom,
So much so that I am undone.
I long for the days of your smile, such fun,
Together, we slowly become as one.

06/01/2009

Posted on 06/01/2009
Copyright © 2025 Joe Cramer

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Jeffrey Parren on 06/01/09 at 08:59 PM

The image of two opening up and closing to one is what I see, maybe a like a flower opens. Romantic and honest, vivid. ~JPP

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