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Crushed me

by Greg Williams

It crushed me,
I didn't know what to say,
rushed in the back,
it was love, it was love.
It came on so strong,
it was consuming at first,
love was absorbed,
quenching a thrist.
Then it crushed me,
consumed all my time,
surrounded by barriers,
surrounded, surrounded.


Posted on 06/01/2009
Copyright © 2024 Greg Williams

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 06/01/09 at 12:32 PM

Obviously, you've got the image down to a pretty brutal science. I like it.

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