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you make me wish i still had wings v. 2

by Aaron Michael

when i hit the earth
every bone in my body liquified.
15 years passed and i
knit myself back to broken.
then i met you,
and broken wasn't enough.

eternity is closer than i think.
and it's not getting easier
rebuilding myself into
something you deserve.
eternity is closer than i think
and it stops for nothing.

so i bribed you with my wings
and you flew away...

05/17/2009

Author's Note: again. thank you mz. smith.

Posted on 05/17/2009
Copyright © 2024 Aaron Michael

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 05/17/09 at 04:09 PM

I really like this.

Posted by Olivia Weinkein on 05/18/09 at 03:30 AM

just beautiful.

Posted by Kris Mara on 05/18/09 at 04:03 PM

Heart wrenching and familiar – the second stanza is immense...and bores itself right in...

Posted by Elizabeth Jill on 08/09/09 at 04:39 PM

thank you, my friend...
I hug this poem and its author

Posted by Elizabeth Jill on 08/09/09 at 04:41 PM



knit myself back to broken

what an experience

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