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by Patricia J Reed

Like taking air from fire
You've slowly extinguished
My zealous nature


Posted on 05/13/2009
Copyright © 2023 Patricia J Reed

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Brian Francis on 07/09/09 at 02:49 PM

I like the title it is absolutely appropriate. Good work. --bf

Posted by Max Bouillet on 07/28/10 at 01:00 AM

I love the way that you show the fire of zealousness needs support to burn. How cruel is it when someone stops supporting and the fire goes out? Beautiful words.

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