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women, woman, whoa man!
by Nanette Bellman
who the hell do you think you are
and what makes you think
that you have the right
to make someone
and by someone, i mean me,
feel like i shouldn't be doing this.
that i shouldn't be standing at this line
and envisioning your face as the bullseye.
i don't care how good you are
or how you don't like women
and how this isn't the place for them.
because when it comes to places,
i won't hesitate to put you in yours.
05/07/2009 Author's Note: nobody puts baby in a corner.
Posted on 05/07/2009
Copyright © 2024 Nanette Bellman
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Charlie Morgan on 05/07/09 at 05:56 PM ...whooooa, maam, it's jes me...a friend from far awawy [well, not that far away!] i like i like...stare 'em down! good 'un.
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| Posted by Kris Mara on 05/07/09 at 06:22 PM right on! this just rocks, that's all I can say |
| Posted by Elizabeth Jill on 05/09/09 at 05:35 PM You wrap things up so shockpunch perfect in your writing. I know when I come in to read you, I am always feeling great about something well put. On this one, when it comes to places -I wish I had your quick mind in my pocket in circumstances so so so like the poem depicts.
Tre bien x 10! |
| Posted by Johnny Crimson on 05/10/09 at 05:54 PM Ever notice how "time of my life" plays at the end of dirt dancing? Well the setting is summer of 1963 but that song came out in 87. Anyway you tell em' nan. :) |
| Posted by Mo Couts on 07/02/11 at 08:58 PM This rocks! Very to the point and serious, yet sassy at the same time...love it. |
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