|Member Comments on this Poem
|Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 05/01/09 at 12:22 PM
Really like those last five lines. Nice work, man.
|Posted by Maude Curtis on 05/01/09 at 03:18 PM
nice write. makes you think of what heaven will be
i imagine it being a repeat of the best day of my life.
|Posted by Nanette Bellman on 05/01/09 at 10:31 PM
I think you've posed a question that we all have and you did it very well sir. Very beautifully written.
|Posted by Clara Mae Gregory on 05/03/09 at 12:02 PM
I've said it already but I'll say it again:Beautiful!
*The Irish in me especially appreciates the beautiful thoughts expressed in this excellent poem!