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I Am A Rag Doll

by Genevieve Sturrock

i am a rag doll
not discarded
just misplaced
and forgotten

perhaps i was missed
cried over, longed for
but easily replaced
and now forgotten

i am smudged and worn
not from misuse
but being loved
by a careless heart

thoughtless handling
has left me fragile
susceptible to
the slightest of
embraces

my seams are
unraveling
and i lose pieces
of myself
wherever i go

will you
gather me up
fill my empty spaces
put me back together

will you clean
my stains and
smudges and
love me with
protective concern

if not
then please
just leave me
as you found me

for i'd rather
keep what dignity
i still maintain
than suffer more
at the hands
of a careless heart

04/27/2009

Author's Note: too many hearts being broken these days...

Posted on 04/27/2009
Copyright © 2025 Genevieve Sturrock

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Charlie Morgan on 04/27/09 at 05:45 PM

...genevieve, what a delight these words are...i saw [immediately] two things: my daughter's Velveteen Rabbit, and megrandson's Mojo [sorta raggedy monkey thingee] that he carries endlessly...but your pome is touching because as we trade kid-things in for more adult-things still those early things are sooooo foundational and seemingly forgotten but buried in there somewhere, eh? great write!

Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 04/27/09 at 06:54 PM

I suppose, eh? Heartbreaking would definitely be a good word to describe this one. Quietly stunning, too.

Posted by A. Paige White on 04/27/09 at 07:58 PM

Oh Genevieve, this is exquisite. If this is you writing from that part of you, you've been scared to expose, please, let me grab a weapon and chase that fear away. It is simply gorgeous! I'm printing it out to read over and over and maybe tuck it under my pillow tonight...

Posted by Shonda Chrissonberry on 04/28/09 at 12:13 AM

Perfect. That is all I am gonna say.

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