| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Charlie Morgan on 04/27/09 at 05:40 PM ...joan, a well posed question, to the ethery, eh?...except for your health issues, there is someone who says this about you!!! so there!...a well-written expose on the frailites of man/woman...personal statements but there are social implications too... a good pome[sic]. |
| Posted by Maude Curtis on 04/27/09 at 06:14 PM Joan "I wish I could be more like you". Sometimes I hide my feelings and just let them build up until I explode. Keep being yourself. I like you that way. |
| Posted by Gregory O'Neill on 04/27/09 at 06:34 PM People can be overrated...here's a disclamer we all could use: "it's too bad I'm not as wonderful a person as people say I am, because the world could use a few people like that." Peace. |
| Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 04/27/09 at 06:41 PM I'd say your just fine on your own terms. Nice work. |
| Posted by George Hoerner on 04/27/09 at 07:42 PM I just wish I could be more like me. Or at least the me I'd like to be more often. There are those with out the question. They already "know" the big answer. I say more power to them and then... Good thoughtful write and we don't always have to be right. We just keep asking the question why. |
| Posted by Maria Massarella on 04/28/09 at 02:11 AM Joan, there is such candid poeticness...a purity in your speak that is of rare beauty. You are wonderful just the way you are...lovelight*peace...m.a |
| Posted by Tony Young on 05/01/09 at 10:01 AM I love your title to this Joan, it feels kind and sincere and it follows through. Greg hits the nail on the head though as people can be overrated
yet in real time this may be not so... |
| Posted by Ken Harnisch on 05/01/09 at 12:37 PM you can be what you wish to be, Joan. Step one is believing you can make it happen. Good luck |
| Posted by Elizabeth Jill on 05/01/09 at 01:42 PM You have gifts unique to only you, gentle one.
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