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Where You Are
by Joan SerratelliI know
where you are
I can feel it
I know
what you're doing
I can picture it
But what
I don't understand
is why you're
hiding from me
when you know
that I need
to talk to you
You know
where I am
you can feel it
You know
what I'm doing
you always do
You can
contact me
whenever
the mood strikes you
but somehow
you hardly ever do
I miss you
you know that
and yet
you chose
to stay away 04/25/2009 Posted on 04/25/2009
Copyright © 2026 Joan Serratelli
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 04/25/09 at 04:13 PM Beautiful and very simply stated. I really liked this. |
| Posted by Gregory O'Neill on 04/25/09 at 08:34 PM Your longing and desire are wonderfully stated here, nice job. Thanks. |
| Posted by Elizabeth Jill on 04/26/09 at 02:12 PM Wow. This is so fine. |
| Posted by Tony Young on 04/28/09 at 09:36 PM I can see you standing alone saying these few simple words, each one so truly meant, the whole is really wonderfull Joan. Nice one.... |
| Posted by Maude Curtis on 04/29/09 at 03:17 AM Nice poem Joan. Beautifully stated the deep love showing though. |
| Posted by Razel Davies on 07/19/09 at 12:25 PM More than a want, this piece perfectly displays that need that is deep within. |
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