she's sending out the invitations today to the birthday party that given the choice you'd never attend your 21st spent among friends you've never met the birthday party that you'll never attend but will remain at forever wondering if she was giving when you could attend if she would have been would you be here now? thinking that given the choice I will not attend either
04/14/2009
Posted on 04/14/2009Copyright © 2026 Maria Terezia Ferencz
..outstanding.....
...mmmm lip-smacking good, yet it is written well, but may be a laconic reason, a sad reason why she will stay at the 21 st birthday forever...a hint of otherworldly, no matter i like, i like. and if you're not goin', neither am i.
Leaving some unanswered questions is always a little intriguing. Nicely done lady and a wonderful write.
I like the way you were subtle in the implications so cleverly expressed in this sad, yet excellent poem- a Very very good piece of writing.
