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it slips through the constellations by Ava Blu
04/13/2009 Posted on 04/13/2009 Copyright © 2026 Ava Blu
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 04/13/09 at 09:41 PM There's a great mix of weary hope and hard-won pessimism running through this. It never contradicts itself. It's simply a beautifully painted scene given weight by your honesty. The thoughts running through your mind in this are unfiltered, unedited and that includes a wonderful mix of joy and sadness. This is wonderful piece of writing. |
| Posted by Jo Halliday on 05/04/09 at 03:07 AM Again, wonderfully honest: as I delve into your library, I am amazed at so many honest beautiful poems in one bunch held! I think most of yours are sure going to land up in my favourites :) |
| Posted by Richard Vince on 12/09/23 at 01:45 PM A night that is simultaneously bright and oppressive. Very visual. |
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