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it slips through the constellations

by Ava Blu


04/13/2009

Posted on 04/13/2009
Copyright © 2026 Ava Blu

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 04/13/09 at 09:41 PM

There's a great mix of weary hope and hard-won pessimism running through this. It never contradicts itself. It's simply a beautifully painted scene given weight by your honesty. The thoughts running through your mind in this are unfiltered, unedited and that includes a wonderful mix of joy and sadness. This is wonderful piece of writing.

Posted by Jo Halliday on 05/04/09 at 03:07 AM

Again, wonderfully honest: as I delve into your library, I am amazed at so many honest beautiful poems in one bunch held! I think most of yours are sure going to land up in my favourites :)

Posted by Richard Vince on 12/09/23 at 01:45 PM

A night that is simultaneously bright and oppressive. Very visual.

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