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by Emily Davidson

for so long my care for you
has been drying up

i tried to keep it wet
despite the blazing sun

but some things
just need to evaporate

03/31/2009

Posted on 03/31/2009
Copyright © 2024 Emily Davidson

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Tom Goss on 03/31/09 at 10:22 PM

Excellent flow and economy; you completed the circle nicely! :)

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