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{my child}3-29-09
by Shonda Creemerthey've gone
and the silence
that has replaced them
stills me
03/29/2009 Author's Note: my house is quiet again
Posted on 03/30/2009
Copyright © 2024 Shonda Creemer
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Genevieve Sturrock on 03/30/09 at 03:21 AM i love that feeling of quiet after guests leave. even when i don't want my friends/family to leave, i still enjoy that special 'this is my space' quiet that comes upon their departure...you captured this so nicely in just a few words. |
| Posted by D. James McKee on 04/01/09 at 01:21 PM
A delicate snowflake this, lovely and unique, as ephemeral as the moment it captures...
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