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the essence that cannot be tracked

by Ava Blu



I can run through the hills where I didn’t just grow up, I grew in- side and by the side of someone else
the rolling of these hills became the Murdered and I the Accomplice covering up with a bed of leaves
but we did not remember to unlock the sky and let the rains wash over our filth, the death of birds and a Spring not meant to remain warm
there are always two little mockingbirds at my window and I am grateful for the awakening, for being able to dive into someone else
when the floods come we do not have an ark and I am unable to build anew
the hills are fresh with promise, though, and I am singing again.

03/29/2009

Posted on 03/29/2009
Copyright © 2026 Ava Blu

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 03/29/09 at 08:02 PM

I've always been envious of writers who can nail imagery that's personal and large scale at the same time. You do that better than anyone I can think of, and this poem proves that beautifully. Great languag and flow, and I especially like that first stanza. It grabs your attention and keeps it firmly in place.

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