| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Joan Serratelli on 03/27/09 at 12:59 PM WOW! What a great message in this piece- I justt loved it- right into favorites! |
| Posted by George Hoerner on 03/27/09 at 01:20 PM Really great write Ken. Nice images and tone make this a really nice read. |
| Posted by Nanette Bellman on 03/27/09 at 04:34 PM What a beautiful write here Ken. I love how you can feel the pain of the defendant having to sit and watch and realize what he's been missing out on. |
| Posted by Charlie Morgan on 03/27/09 at 11:23 PM ...greeeeaaat turn of our precious language...i har-hared, and grinned while seeing you phrase on out...a pointy point. |
| Posted by Morgan D Hafele on 03/27/09 at 11:48 PM seems like most of us spend out time in the bleachers...maybe trying to figure out how to get back in the game |
| Posted by Sandy M. Humphrey on 03/31/09 at 06:37 PM Ahh, poignant message here, such misdemeanors can be claimed by many but oh maybe you saved a few the crime by your reminder to participate. I would hate to have to not at least applaud the efforts of others by sitting on my hands. Excellent write and all I can say is next time the music plays I am dancing in my chair and singing along out of tune and all. smh |
