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Hope's End
by Razel DaviesFire a shot,
Barrel smokes.
Hot cold metal,
Bleeding drowns.
Moonlit scream,
Hope fades.
Your once warmth,
Now dead.
Your life smile,
Now deaths hand.
Lifeless gun,
Senseless loss.
Betrayed by hell,
Cast away by angels.
Dark no longer warm,
Only empty.
Final end,
Cold hand grasp.
Loss of me,
Loss of hope. 03/26/2009
Author's Note: Written back in the dark days.
Posted on 03/26/2009
Copyright © 2025 Razel Davies
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Joan Serratelli on 03/26/09 at 11:24 AM Dark but at the same time beautiful. I LOVED the shape of this piece (very creative!) and cannot help but wonder if it was intentional. Exceptional writing- a good read! |
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