square one by Emily Davidsonevery relationship
has the same routine
where when things start to go wrong
the woman first begs
but then demands
for change
and the man, his eyes to floor,
apologizes and recognizes
what needs to be done
and things look bright until
one week later
they're back at square one 03/24/2009 Posted on 03/25/2009 Copyright © 2024 Emily Davidson
Member Comments on this Poem |
Posted by Nanette Bellman on 03/25/09 at 02:04 AM Em, dear, this is true. But I'll tell you a secret on how to really make them see and maybe it won't work for you but it worked for me...sometimes it takes you leaving for them to see the big picture and actually MAKE the changes. Good luck darling. |
Posted by Genevieve Sturrock on 03/25/09 at 04:02 AM so many different thoughts are swimming through my head...this struck many different chords with me. |
Posted by Joan Serratelli on 03/25/09 at 12:22 PM This piece is sooooo true and rings much too close to home- great write! |
Posted by George Hoerner on 03/25/09 at 01:20 PM If you have to "change" the other in any relationship, it may be a good thing to rethink that situation. People really change much after the teenage years unless they have a very significant event occur in the lives and maybe you that event but then maybe you aren't. |
Posted by Rowan Luis on 03/30/09 at 12:09 AM frustration frustration frustration frustration |
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