| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 03/25/09 at 12:33 AM Humorous look at the weatherpersons! Words may "undress" the weather but never creates it methinks! Fun read. |
| Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 03/25/09 at 12:36 AM On second reading I think I totally missed the point! LOL! Ahhh but God started it all. Either way enjoyed the read. |
| Posted by Nanette Bellman on 03/25/09 at 02:11 AM Try living in Ohio. Ha. Clever read. |
| Posted by Joan Serratelli on 03/25/09 at 11:43 AM Try living in "Joisey" LOL! Good write- enjoyable read! |
| Posted by Ken Harnisch on 03/25/09 at 12:28 PM Try living in the Big Apple where the weather people are all at odds with each other and the forecasts are fuzzy...congratulations! See ya on the Weather Channel! |
| Posted by Morgan D Hafele on 03/25/09 at 05:58 PM "she blushing smiles, her cheeks
slapped by the wings of a storm" my favorite two lines |
| Posted by Anita Mac on 03/25/09 at 08:56 PM Ha! Of course Morgs and I would have the same favorite lines... This is a rather short one for you. I like it... Something about it reminds me of 'Hills Like White Elephants'. |
| Posted by Elizabeth Jill on 03/25/09 at 10:28 PM How delicately you have described the hope of a mutual blush of love. How sacred such [an everlasting hope of the] moment is. |
| Posted by Elizabeth Jill on 03/25/09 at 10:31 PM I wonder if this is all my daft interpretation, and if so, then -how fine it is to be able to author a poem that takes each particular reader into a different way of seeing the poem.
Your friend in sanity.
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| Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 03/26/09 at 08:16 PM "her cheeks
slapped by the wings of a storm."--I like that. You definitely know how to set up your heroines for trouble. Good stuff. |
| Posted by Tony Young on 03/27/09 at 10:43 PM Thats nice, they did this on my birthday...
Your m.a. in meteorology shold help, what was the sperm count ? lol
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| Posted by Maude Curtis on 04/02/09 at 06:10 PM We have a saying in Missouri. "If you don't like the weather stick around it'll be completely different tomorrow." |
