pathetic.org :: {my child}3-10-09 by Shonda Creemer

{my child}3-10-09

drop a penny
in the prayer jar

and hope He
hears this time

so tired of
them coming up
short

03/10/2009

Author's Note: very weary

Posted on 03/11/2009
Copyright © 2024 Shonda Creemer

Member Comments on this Poem

Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 03/11/09 at 03:43 AM

Wonderfully understated. Well done, as always.

Posted by Joan Serratelli on 03/11/09 at 01:27 PM

A long message in such a short piece. It fascinates me how you do that. Good write-

Posted by D. James McKee on 03/13/09 at 03:35 PM

A startling take on the swear jar. I love it!

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