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Forever I Wait

by Joe Cramer

Forever I wait

For that self-same day

When you will be with me.

I want a love so desperately

This is my heart-felt plea.

This is exactly the way

I wait. I hope it's not too late.

03/07/2009

Author's Note: ... I love writing implosion poems.....

Posted on 03/07/2009
Copyright © 2024 Joe Cramer

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Joan Serratelli on 03/07/09 at 04:59 PM

Beautiful and very romantic- filled with emotion. A heartfrlt plea. YOU WILL FIND HER! She is out there, searching for the same thing you are. Don't give up! Good write

Posted by Nicole D Gregory on 03/07/09 at 05:28 PM

Nice write! Implosion? This is a very real explosion desire - I do hope you find what you are looking for. Living in paradise on your own... sort of why God created Eve, huh? ;) ~N

Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 03/07/09 at 05:41 PM

It's always good stuff. Nicely done.

Posted by Maude Curtis on 03/07/09 at 11:15 PM

Sweet poem. Good luck finding your love. It's put there somewhere.

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