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Her Last Christmas
by Joan SerratelliIt was to be
her last Christmas
and she was
the only one who knew
The presents were wrapped
especially nice
and everyone got
exacttly what they wanted
The dinnner was made
it was especially elegant
and very delishous
that last year
The table looked gorgeous
the tree looked devine
and everyone commented
they had a really good time
It was to be
her last Christmas
and only she knew
her life would be over
come the new year 03/05/2009 Author's Note: I don't recall when I wrote this or why.
Posted on 03/05/2009
Copyright © 2026 Joan Serratelli
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 03/05/09 at 05:28 PM Either way, it's a nicely captured image. Nothing too heavy or complicated. It just works quite well. |
| Posted by Gregory O'Neill on 03/05/09 at 07:58 PM Yes, well sometimes these thing need to "escape", it's very plausable, tidy idea, well writ. |
| Posted by Razel Davies on 03/14/09 at 12:31 PM It sounds like a beautiful tribute. A way we all probably wish to be remembered, for that one special day. |
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