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i'm colder than Klondike but you're dateless on Friday night
by Nanette Bellmani watched him pick up a Klondike bar
and i tried to make small talk,
"what would you do for a Klondike bar?"
"wouldn't you like to know?" he said.
i turned away and stood in line.
he tapped me on the shoulders and said,
"what would you do?"
"not a damn thing, i don't like them." 03/04/2009 Author's Note: if you don't pick up on my pick up lines, you're going down.
Posted on 03/04/2009
Copyright © 2024 Nanette Bellman
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Johnny Crimson on 03/04/09 at 06:51 PM takes palm, smacks forehead. |
| Posted by Joan Serratelli on 03/04/09 at 06:56 PM LOL very cute! I don't like them either! Adorable read! |
| Posted by Nicole D Gregory on 03/04/09 at 07:42 PM SWEET!!! Chick you rock! I like your rules... and your 'in your face' attitude! This made me laugh out loud! and its one of those days when I needed a laugh... God! now I want to go hang out in the freezer section of the grocery... ~N |
| Posted by Ken Harnisch on 03/04/09 at 08:33 PM The fool! if he had picked up on the pickup lines he'd not be standing there with just his ice cream stick in his hand..:) |
| Posted by Sandy M. Humphrey on 03/05/09 at 05:23 AM Not one for second chances but then a smart guy would have got it the first time....clever. smh |
| Posted by Julie Adams on 03/05/09 at 05:06 PM ur hilarious and this is awesome! Kudos girly, kudos...peace, jewels |
| Posted by Rhiannon Jones on 03/08/09 at 03:29 AM zinger! |
| Posted by Christine Thibeault on 01/25/10 at 03:03 PM LoVe it! |
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