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Consecution of a Serial Lover (Sestina)

by Alison McKenzie

In hues of squander sleeps merciless ache -
Promises of longevity, substance crumbling,
Brilliant cheeks of sanguine
Suffer drought, dreams to pasture, pallid,
Where, once, dawn reigned in efflorescence,
Summoning spring.

Gurgling waters giggled from artesian spring,
Belying winter’s ache -
Rivers thawing in passion’s efflorescence,
The levees crumbling, crumbling,
While he stumbles, pallid,
Shedding his layers of sanguine.

While she, with her basket to gather sanguine,
Skips glorious behind, traps to spring -
Discovers her lover, pallid -
Bends to caress, allay the ache,
Curious to witness the crumbling
Decay of a life once saturated in efflorescence.

And she, with her obsession to gather efflorescence,
Bathes - in his blood - paints her own cheeks of his, sanguine
The vestibules of her sanctuary crumbling,
While she, oblivious to mortality’s spring,
Defeans to his haunting ache -
His ghost, emerging pallid.

Still ravenous to rid her forest pallid,
She devours the last of his efflorescence,
Desperate to satisfy her vast ache -
Gluttonous banquet of unholy sanguine,
Cause of wicked laughter spring,
Shards of her humanity crumbling, crumbling

His shredded flesh in resurrection crumbling,
Reflects the failing winter, scars of melting, pallid,
Where once, from innocence, intention did spring,
The strength of youth in radiant efflorescence
Danced in the elixir of sanguine,
Unacquainted with ache.

Efflorescence crumbling,
The spring of sanguine drained
In the pallid exposure of ache.

03/02/2009

Author's Note: OMGosh - (note to Professor Schell) don't EVER make me do that again! Hehe. Feedback would be ENTIRELY appreciated!!!

Posted on 03/02/2009
Copyright © 2024 Alison McKenzie

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Shonda Creemer on 03/03/09 at 03:08 AM

I think this is brilliant. And you choose words that made both the writer and the reader think....words not easy to use ~ especially at the end....and getting the stanzas like that....I've done this before ~ it is not easy. Anyway ~ seems I've made a mess of this comment, probably why I don't leave as many as I like. I can NEVER get my own darn words to come out right. But you made this form look so effortless! Bravo Ali. +fav

Posted by Lyss Copeland on 03/20/09 at 08:08 PM

I love poems that use words that cause me to think, to have to crack open my dictionary and discover a new richness in the English language. This is a very lovely poem :)

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