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Medicated Wonder World

by Cole Miller

Medicated wonder world
how different will you be,
From life as i know it?

i'm certain you'll be better
but i cant get myself to you.

too many things unknown.

03/01/2009

Posted on 03/02/2009
Copyright © 2024 Cole Miller

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 03/02/09 at 04:32 AM

This has a nice, disjointed energy to it. A thought that's almost complete. Don't take that in any negative light though. I really like it.

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