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A Face Full Of Tears

I wanted to say

happy birthday

I know
all you got
for the 33 years
was
a face full of tears

03/01/2009

Posted on 03/01/2009
Copyright © 2024 Tony Young

Member Comments on this Poem

Posted by Joan Serratelli on 03/01/09 at 07:41 PM

Really good- straight to the point. Good read. you said so much with an econony of words!

Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 03/01/09 at 09:16 PM

Right to the heart. I like that, and you go after that idea exceptionally well here. Nice.

Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 03/25/09 at 12:25 AM

Poignancy defined poetically!

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