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it's the clothes that make the soul

by Ava Blu


I wear pink to be ironic,
the outside not matching the in-
crowd
and I don’t really care

they think I am Walking Death
and I just smirk at the compliment
wondering if the Grim Reaper has this much fun

I’m not as dark as it seems
but the evil in the world always influences me

I just can’t help wanting to be in Hell
with the fire in my hair

I like to believe I’d make a really good ghost
or zombie
when the world rots away

flames embedded in my flesh,
I think you could lick it and still smile

I’m hot ash and burning bush
all rolled into one

and one day when you’re praying
I’ll be the one to answer.

02/24/2009

Posted on 02/24/2009
Copyright © 2025 Ava Blu

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Joan Serratelli on 02/24/09 at 07:54 PM

VERY haunting poem. I think that's what you wanted and you accomplished your goal. Excellent read- well written. Great job!

Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 02/24/09 at 08:53 PM

Some of the strangest imagery I think I've seen from you in quite some time. It rolls and moves and breathes with your usual brilliant work. I love that first stanza, too.

Posted by Rhiannon Jones on 02/25/09 at 05:27 PM

"I just can’t help wanting to be in Hell with the fire in my hair" - I like that line especially.

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