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february twentieth

by Ava Blu


the best parts of me are hidden beneath
the weeds in this garden that is not Eden

will you trim so i can be seen?

will you forget about my sordid past?

and will you allow something to bloom
even amongst the bugs and the thousands of reasons why
we should never be.

02/20/2009

Posted on 02/21/2009
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Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 02/21/09 at 05:35 PM

I really like the metaphor in this. Nicely done.

Posted by Shirin Swift on 02/21/09 at 10:24 PM

I absolutely love the opening lines

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