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{my child}2-20-09

by Shonda Creemer

it seems
the what ifs
will not let
me have a moments
peace

02/20/2009

Author's Note: i'm so very weary

Posted on 02/21/2009
Copyright © 2024 Shonda Creemer

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Posted by Charlie Morgan on 02/21/09 at 04:41 PM

...am i the only one who feels eXactly what you're saying[in my own world, at least]in a few words you speak of an entire Shakespearean drama, that is why time heals wounds, notice i left out "all"[all is a pretty big arena]...shon, i hear your weary statement...and having been your age once, i, at 62 still realize an existential quasi-disconnect with the "way" mankind is developing[i include meself]...so when i say these short words are looooong in meaning, touche! one's pain is growth.

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