This is a great write Wiley. We are rarely lousy while doing something regardless of what it is. Since when we are "in the moment/doing" it is difficult if not impossible to be also judging what we are, who we are, and how we are doing. Only because we carry this mirror image of a mind or something like one that in retrospect do we ask that damnable question, "how am I doing?", "who am I?", and "why?". If someone walked behind us with a paint brush and a bucket of whitewash wiping out every thing done as it was done, we'd have lost our mirror and would be far less concerned about how we've done, etc. And I do love the write.

...gulp! wiley, don't know of the commercial...but i like-a-de-concept...a human doing...thanks for the knock on my door...cool write...

nice rebuttle to Charlie's poem. let me tell you, that last stanza makes the entire thing.

Hahahahaha. Nice build to a one-two-punch. But which four letter words would he use, eh? ...and would they be in English?