way wrong answer

by Nanette Bellman

my words were coming out
like my vision, blurry.
because you made me so angry
i couldn't see straight.
the only way they made sense
was in letter form.
so i wrote you letter
and ask you
what you thought of it
"well, you have really nice handwriting..."


Author's Note: you are the weakest link. goodbye.

Posted on 02/19/2009
Copyright © 2020 Nanette Bellman

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Joan Serratelli on 02/19/09 at 05:08 PM

that really is tacky! You're better off without this person in your life. Good read- excellent write

Posted by Charlie Morgan on 02/19/09 at 05:55 PM

...great thinking pome...love the bow [tieing-up] of the entire pome...fools we are many times[a day],eh?

Posted by Elizabeth Jill on 02/19/09 at 05:57 PM

You write how I think. If I could spill things out like this - life sure would be increasingly validating. Many people wish they could write like you. I'm one of them.

(Oh, and, yes: that person doesn't even have a clue what a link is to begin with.)

Posted by Ava Blu on 02/19/09 at 06:52 PM

ugh. people just don't get it, or they really don't care. i think i do better in letter form.

Posted by Jason Wardell on 02/20/09 at 03:27 AM

Damn. I've had blurry words before, sounds like this guy's having a blurry brain day/week/month/life.

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