way wrong answer
by Nanette Bellman
my words were coming out
like my vision, blurry.
because you made me so angry
i couldn't see straight.
the only way they made sense
was in letter form.
so i wrote you letter
and ask you
what you thought of it
"well, you have really nice handwriting..."
Author's Note: you are the weakest link. goodbye.
Posted on 02/19/2009
Copyright © 2020 Nanette Bellman
|Member Comments on this Poem|
|Posted by Joan Serratelli on 02/19/09 at 05:08 PM|
that really is tacky! You're better off without this person in your life.
Good read- excellent write
|Posted by Charlie Morgan on 02/19/09 at 05:55 PM|
...great thinking pome...love the bow [tieing-up] of the entire pome...fools we are many times[a day],eh?
|Posted by Elizabeth Jill on 02/19/09 at 05:57 PM|
You write how I think. If I could spill things out like this - life sure would be increasingly validating. Many people wish they could write like you. I'm one of them.
(Oh, and, yes: that person doesn't even have a clue what a link is to begin with.)
|Posted by Ava Blu on 02/19/09 at 06:52 PM|
ugh. people just don't get it, or they really don't care. i think i do better in letter form.
|Posted by Jason Wardell on 02/20/09 at 03:27 AM|
Damn. I've had blurry words before, sounds like this guy's having a blurry brain day/week/month/life.