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{my child}2-18-09

by Shonda Creemer

if i write you
down on a tiny
piece of paper

and stick it in
the corner of
my mind

would you
go away

and leave me be

my heart
she can't take
anymore of you

02/18/2009

Posted on 02/19/2009
Copyright © 2024 Shonda Creemer

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 02/19/09 at 03:31 AM

Heartbreaking and beautifully written. I know I've probably said that a dozen times before, but it remains true.

Posted by Genevieve Sturrock on 02/19/09 at 07:31 AM

i love the idea of writing someone down on a tiny piece of paper...but throw it to the wind and let it fall where it may far away from your mind and heart.

Posted by D. James McKee on 03/13/09 at 03:06 PM

If only we could slay the ghosts with paper... Nice write!

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