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Everybody Thinks It's Funny

by Jeffrey Parren

and it is
for about  the first
handful of times
you hear it
but
the

"Are you taking us
to the bathroom?!"

line of comedy
is simply tiresome

especially if you
are the waiter
that has to work
around said area.

Denied tables

because no one
wants to be away
from the action
and busy atmosphere

the secluded room
doesn't offer.

Just like that waiter.

No action,
no money.

Zip it, buddy.

02/17/2009

Posted on 02/17/2009
Copyright © 2024 Jeffrey Parren

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 02/17/09 at 02:56 PM

I really like your style here, man. It's a rhythm that's very hard to put down.

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