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Can I say something to you?

by Johnny Crimson

All
we
ever
ate
was
silence.
I
tried
to
divide
my
portions
into
whispers
and
then
realized
you
were
never
real.

02/12/2009

Posted on 02/12/2009
Copyright © 2024 Johnny Crimson

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Ava Blu on 02/12/09 at 02:49 PM

i love it. i love the format, the words, the message, etc. some people hate silence, and i suppose they often have a valid reason for it.

Posted by Nanette Bellman on 02/12/09 at 06:25 PM

look what i did to you sean. i've wrecked your entire writing world...but it's working for you.

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