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Feb. 4 - A Treatise on Strikeouts
by Jason WardellIt's the story of my life:
I can't put up with the sneezing,
you can't put up with the tissues.
I could pour out a gallon of ink
in revisions alone
and not be any closer
to what the hell I mean.
02/04/2009 Author's Note: 11:45pm-1:03am the next day and this is what I have to show for it.
Posted on 02/05/2009
Copyright © 2024 Jason Wardell
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Ava Blu on 02/05/09 at 03:15 PM ahhhhhhhh lovelove this. |
| Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 02/05/09 at 04:19 PM I couldn't have put it better myself. Anyone who hasn't been to that place isn't writing enough. Well said. |
| Posted by Nanette Bellman on 02/05/09 at 04:26 PM that's why i gave up writing on paper. it's too much work, too much stress, too intimidating. |
| Posted by Nanette Bellman on 02/05/09 at 04:26 PM that's why i gave up writing on paper. it's too much work, too much stress, too intimidating. |
| Posted by V. Blake on 11/29/09 at 10:04 PM Found this in random member favorites. I'm so definitely going through your library now, because the only two poems I've read of yours so far have both found their way into my own favorites list. |
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