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Marine's Lament

by Johnny Crimson

i took from the left

and put in the hole

as i grabbed grenades

and rolled down below

the enemy sees

oh, nothing at all

they'll die in their sleep

with their dreams on the wall

so i took from the left

my sergeant wanted me to

now were all in a hole

with nothing to do

02/04/2009

Author's Note: posted the simple version for nanette.

Posted on 02/04/2009
Copyright © 2025 Johnny Crimson

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Nanette Bellman on 02/05/09 at 02:28 AM

are you serious you turd? thanks. i think this is much stronger. but i understand what you did with the first. speaking of first, you better have left it up mister or coming to mae you in the face. ha.

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