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"Hold Your Breath"

by Max Phineas

If you accept
F
A
L
L
I
N
G
as an inevitability
it softens the landing
and saves the ego.

You can crashdowninstyle
Like a grinning captain
Saluting
atop a
doomed
vessel.


01/29/2009

Posted on 01/29/2009
Copyright © 2024 Max Phineas

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Julie Adams on 01/29/09 at 09:48 PM

...wonderful poem, in shape, tone and depth...stunning final image, girly...peace, jewels

Posted by Ava Blu on 01/31/09 at 08:54 PM

I always like when people play with the formatting. Beautiful.

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