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Debut
by Alison McKenzieThe sun slant sings of spring
Casting glad shadows
Into the morning window
This time of day
Brings a needed peace and hope
My newest wind chimes
Join the chorus
The cleansing wind
Sweeping away
The obsolete tendencies
That peppered the last two years
01/28/2009 Author's Note: Mmmm, I love it when the first hint of spring peeks into the season!
Posted on 01/28/2009
Copyright © 2025 Alison McKenzie
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 01/28/09 at 06:17 PM Bah humbug. Still like this though. |
| Posted by George Hoerner on 01/28/09 at 08:47 PM Good thoughts and write Alison. Time to find the seeds and start planting again. |
| Posted by Charlie Morgan on 01/29/09 at 03:56 PM ...did Gabe see his shadow?...i just love this lil' package! pinpoint on the sun's rays... |
| Posted by Julie Adams on 01/29/09 at 09:10 PM this piece seems filled with a native American tone for me, like a feather dancing on a dream catcher, it is filled with optimism and energy and a cleansing...and what a beautiful poem to read so early in the year...peace, jewels xxx |
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