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Feeling

by George Hoerner

the verge of feeling

too hard

the heart

nearly breaks

and the mind

is already

broken

sent spiraling

out of control

down narrow paths

with nothing

but black

ahead

never really

knowing

there was

an end

12/26/2001

Posted on 01/27/2009
Copyright © 2024 George Hoerner

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 01/27/09 at 05:56 PM

I've had days like that. Sharply written and very straight-to-the-point.

Posted by Charlie Morgan on 01/29/09 at 04:18 PM

...alfred hitchcokian, even in darkness lies hope, we can't echo-locate tho, good write, george.

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