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Bare Nature

by Deanna M Gritsonis

Pressing me

Its almost to rough to press against

Yet it heightens the feeling

The early morning dew cools the naked skin

Your kisses taste different in the forest

The air tickles my skin

as your hands trace my nature

here we are

pure

basic

bare

09/10/2007

Posted on 01/27/2009
Copyright © 2024 Deanna M Gritsonis

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Timothy Burns on 11/30/11 at 04:51 AM

I really like the cadence of this poem. I like the idea of someone's kisses tasting due to geography. I will be back to read more of your work!

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