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a love poem
by Travis G Finborgas the tears dropped
i forgot to say
that I have always loved her
I would give up my secure little life
come sweep to see her
to hear those words from her
each time i open the door
i think that if i walked long enough
i would come to her door
and i know i would walk long 01/26/2009 Posted on 01/26/2009
Copyright © 2026 Travis G Finborg
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 01/26/09 at 09:08 PM I hope they appreciate the sentiment. You express it with sharpness and clarity. |
| Posted by George Hoerner on 01/26/09 at 10:52 PM Ah yes, how far would any of us walk to be with a loved one. Or to write a poem if we had to. Good thoughts. |
| Posted by Leonard M Hawkes on 01/31/09 at 06:19 AM Nice poem, Travis--pathos and vigor. |
| Posted by Richard Vince on 03/11/15 at 12:06 AM a most deserving POTD. :) |
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