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Look Me in the Eyes

by S. Pelham Flood

you left it on my lips
the faint taste of you
and now on my tongue
"I love you"

01/25/2009

Posted on 01/25/2009
Copyright © 2024 S. Pelham Flood

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 01/25/09 at 05:42 PM

I like how this could go either way. Nice.

Posted by Jared Fladeland on 01/27/09 at 06:13 PM

ha. this is a very complex poem. like gabriel said, this poem could go in any which way, and yet it still hits you in the gut. saying so little can mean so much.

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