Commit At Least This Indiscretion by Melissa PantherIf you feel it
Then why the silence
From where are you
Urged to quiet your masses
Theres a difference between
Knowing who you are
And allowing yourself to
Open to the flood
Convert your apathy
Move into and force
Away
Rinse absent
Lean into your senses
Release your outlet,
Your arms
Disambiguate
Accept
You are learning how
Commit at least this indiscretion
01/20/2009 Posted on 01/20/2009 Copyright © 2025 Melissa Panther
Member Comments on this Poem |
Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 01/20/09 at 10:21 PM A wonderfully written call to arms (of sorts). I like the third stanza most of all. |
Posted by Charlie Morgan on 01/21/09 at 10:54 PM ...l like gabe's pun...i love this pome...i like your word-choice and the line-breaks, both give it power... |
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