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Commit At Least This Indiscretion

by Melissa Panther

If you feel it
Then why the silence
From where are you
Urged to quiet your masses

There’s a difference between
Knowing who you are
And allowing yourself to
Open to the flood

Convert your apathy
Move into and force
Away
Rinse absent
Lean into your senses
Release your outlet,
Your arms

Disambiguate
Accept
You are learning how
Commit at least this indiscretion

01/20/2009

Posted on 01/20/2009
Copyright © 2024 Melissa Panther

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 01/20/09 at 10:21 PM

A wonderfully written call to arms (of sorts). I like the third stanza most of all.

Posted by Charlie Morgan on 01/21/09 at 10:54 PM

...l like gabe's pun...i love this pome...i like your word-choice and the line-breaks, both give it power...

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