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The Aurora Borealis & The Girl In The Black Slip (Tanka)

by Terry Olynik

Gestating hatred
Our future on life support
Love bartered now gone
You cry into silk pillows
I watch the northern lights dance.

01/17/2009

Posted on 01/17/2009
Copyright © 2024 Terry Olynik

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 01/18/09 at 12:11 AM

Nice contrast, man. Really well done.

Posted by Amie Golda on 02/19/10 at 02:19 AM

I love the parallelism in the title and how the title matches well with the poem as well.

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