| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 01/16/09 at 09:52 PM I like that sentiment. It's captured so well here. |
| Posted by Anne Engelen on 01/16/09 at 10:27 PM truly enjoyed the feeling this gave me, great read George. |
| Posted by Colleen Sperry on 01/17/09 at 12:07 AM such a good write! well done |
| Posted by Laurie Blum on 01/17/09 at 04:13 AM I can certainly identify with this. Perfectly worded. |
| Posted by Charlie Morgan on 01/17/09 at 10:44 PM ...already i loved it when i perceived this first hint of personification and w/ none other than haaaaawd stone, scratching your hand, lovely...and thennnn the stone lets go of you/me/us...cool. |
| Posted by Mary Frances Spencer on 01/18/09 at 05:19 AM Back and forth rolling we all spin together then crumble! I like this one! MFS |
