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Dancing Dreams
by Alisa Jswas I wrong to believe in the dream again
peered through the windows of chance
brimming on the edge of a smile,
undetected
till now,
full of hope and a promise
that sweetened my days
and warmed my night fires,
thoughts of renewal and change
for this beating heart
that has seen so much pain and other great sorrows
life is a dream
a mere illusion of the mind
when does reality set in?
maybe when one or the other finds
a new way to say
its time
01/14/2009 Posted on 01/14/2009
Copyright © 2024 Alisa Js
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 01/14/09 at 09:35 PM I really like those last three lines. Well stated. |
| Posted by George Hoerner on 01/14/09 at 10:42 PM There is no reality except that which we make up as we go along. We take a step and say a word hoping both might mean something. |
| Posted by Laurie Blum on 01/15/09 at 02:57 AM Always take the chance! Very well written. |
| Posted by Mary Frances Spencer on 01/15/09 at 03:31 AM Nothing like the present moment to take that step! MFS |
| Posted by Steve Baba on 01/18/09 at 06:33 AM To dream, to dream....Excellent poem. |
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