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by Uriel Tovar

we dance to a silent
Night
underneath pale glowing stars--
dim to the sky's infinite darkness

the sand
shuffles
and cracks underneath your
sandaled heels
and my sneakers slide
along with
the motion of your hips

we are cumbersome
compared
to the wind, but i don't mind
at all

soon we will be like waves

one into another.

01/12/2009

Author's Note: fixed it up a little not too much

Posted on 01/13/2009
Copyright © 2025 Uriel Tovar

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 01/13/09 at 03:55 AM

I missed this stuff. Your voice has always been one of the great ones here.

Posted by Meghan Helmich on 01/14/09 at 02:54 PM

gabe is right (as usual.) there's some comforting voice of romance in your words...like something i should've known already, but i don't mind your reminder. beautiful, uriel.

Posted by Paul Lastovica on 01/14/09 at 05:19 PM

nice, as per usual =)

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