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Methylenedioxymethamphetamine by Melissa PantherFollow Campbell urges
Quirks clever
Entendres doubled
Spaces small in laughs long
Rain summer during back youre on flat
Page every on Waldo finding
Down windows, up music cruising
Sand over water salt
Streamlined curvaceously
Ciroc, Effen, choose you
Buttons shiny that
Pushed to be begged
Neck on lips
Prints on fingers
Chair tied
Sink dripping
Brazil nut earth on tongue
Its all good for business
Whitman did speak of multitudes
And contain them I do
01/08/2009 Posted on 01/08/2009 Copyright © 2025 Melissa Panther
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 01/09/09 at 06:11 AM I love how jarring some of these lines read. Like a series of short jabs to the ribs. Nice. |
| Posted by Ken Harnisch on 01/09/09 at 08:27 PM Ah, the language...a puzzle perhaps and yet, as Gabriel says, jarring, lively and damned engaging when read over and over! |
| Posted by Charlie Morgan on 01/21/09 at 10:47 PM ...Ms. Panther, i stand at your hest. i am in love with this [appearingly, only appearingly] goofy pome[sic]...it is heavier than a battleship. i bow to you, now back to your lib. |
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